The door opened and Snape stepped in with a cup of coffee, and paused. He eyed the four Gryffindors and the well ordered room now full of food and smelling like cake, and said, "Potter," before taking a sip of his coffee.
"Sir," Harry said. Ron gave him a sideways glance but said nothing.
--Those moment was my favorite! lol. Just the image that came with that was perfect. Also, Dobby suggesting that Harry swim in all the food! lol. This story was cute and adorable and had a smattering of serious thrown in and it was just...gah! *fangirl flails* Loved it
loved it, it would be great to find out what happens during break.
I love all of the endearing details, from Snape in an apron, to Harry hiding under the table, Hufflepuff suddenly getting ham, to 40 types of goodies for the elves! It really did the students good to serve their detentions working like elves in order to gain a true appreciation of how much work goes into the meal that heretofore had appeared like magic in the Great Hall. Even using magic, the elves certainly put time and effort into their work. And best of all, Harry doesn't have to go back to Surrey in the summers! Yay!
sweet story, I really like the Harry/elf comparison. of course this story screams for a sequel! :D
Great story. Very creative and fun to read. Loved how you kept everybody in character, especially Snape.
i love it!!!! i think that the house elves should have done that in the book. :)
What a beautiful story. It was tender, charming and heartwarming. And I've missed your stories these days. Thanks for writing and especially for sharing.
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