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Reviews For Spiral of Trust
Title: Chapter 31 Dead wizards do not Apparate 25 Jan 2021 6:34 pm
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    I don’t know how useful this is, years later, but I have some word choice notes.

    You’ve been using arrested to mean stop. (Definitely a false friend for French speakers!) While it can mean that when used as an adjective (arrested movement), as a verb it means to seize (someone) by legal authority and take into custody, so I keep thinking the person is being taken to a ministry cell.

    Also: Floo powder, not Flo powder. Flo is a woman’s name.

    The story continues to be compelling. Snape’s habit of jumping to conclusions does not help his interactions with Harry, that is certain.

    Thanks for writing!
Title: Chapter 31 Dead wizards do not Apparate 27 Jun 2015 11:58 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry and Ginny suddenly appearing was a surprise. Good thing Snape was able to do some emergency first aid. Severus seems like someone who would use anger as a way to deal with fear so his rant at Harry was something I would expect from him. He may be furious but will do his best to help Harry and Ginny. I did like Ginny's thanks to him as well as cleaning the blood off him and Harry.
Title: Chapter 31 Dead wizards do not Apparate 22 Jun 2015 6:21 am
Reviewer: RLara (Signed) [Report This]
    Huh. It's so ironic that Harry ended up actually killing someone when he had such difficulty with the Avadas in the beginning. Must be quite weird and troubling for him... Does Snape remember?

    I wish they'd just go back to Hogwarts and all but I sort of want to know all that happened inside the nightclub..

    Hope you're able to post more soon, this is one of my favourite fics.
    Have a nice vacation! =]

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review. I’m glad that you enjoy my story! There will be a few more chapters that will take place at the Ministry of Magic and at St Mungo’s, but eventually they will of course return to Hogwarts. Snape remembers Harry’s difficulties with the AK at the beginning of the story - I am thrilled that you do as well, as the next chapter builds on those experiences from the first chapters of the book.


Title: Chapter 31 Dead wizards do not Apparate 19 Jun 2015 9:57 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very dramatic chapter. I'm not sure about Harry killing, he hated doing an imperious in DH so not sure if he could but great chapter

    Author's Response:

    I am happy you caught up with me and left me your reviews - they are always appreciated! The chapter I am posting now will hold a discussion about Avada Kedavras. You’re right - it was very hard for Harry to do it. 


Title: Chapter 31 Dead wizards do not Apparate 18 Jun 2015 5:13 pm
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    Though I completely understand Harry's instinct to get back to the UK, he did mess up big time by fleeing custody. I wonder how that will play out. There's got to be come consequences to that I'd imagine. Like not being accepted into the Auror program at the very least.

    I hope you have a great vacation!

    Author's Response:

    I’m afraid the consequences of the attack in Paris and Harry’s AK will need a few more chapters to sort out. It will be complicated - but I kind of like that :-) 

     

    I had a great vacation, by the way - I hadn’t been abroad for a long time and it’s always sort of refreshing to realise that everyday life can play out in slightly different ways than at home, and still be just fine!



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