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Reviews For Spiral of Trust
You’ve been using arrested to mean stop. (Definitely a false friend for French speakers!) While it can mean that when used as an adjective (arrested movement), as a verb it means to seize (someone) by legal authority and take into custody, so I keep thinking the person is being taken to a ministry cell. Also: Floo powder, not Flo powder. Flo is a woman’s name. The story continues to be compelling. Snape’s habit of jumping to conclusions does not help his interactions with Harry, that is certain. Thanks for writing!
I wish they'd just go back to Hogwarts and all but I sort of want to know all that happened inside the nightclub.. Hope you're able to post more soon, this is one of my favourite fics. Have a nice vacation! =] Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I’m glad that you enjoy my story! There will be a few more chapters that will take place at the Ministry of Magic and at St Mungo’s, but eventually they will of course return to Hogwarts. Snape remembers Harry’s difficulties with the AK at the beginning of the story - I am thrilled that you do as well, as the next chapter builds on those experiences from the first chapters of the book.
Author's Response: I am happy you caught up with me and left me your reviews - they are always appreciated! The chapter I am posting now will hold a discussion about Avada Kedavras. You’re right - it was very hard for Harry to do it.
I hope you have a great vacation! Author's Response: I’m afraid the consequences of the attack in Paris and Harry’s AK will need a few more chapters to sort out. It will be complicated - but I kind of like that :-)
I had a great vacation, by the way - I hadn’t been abroad for a long time and it’s always sort of refreshing to realise that everyday life can play out in slightly different ways than at home, and still be just fine! |
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