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Reviews For Spiral of Trust
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Next chapter's up now :-)
Author's Response: Snape's past is cathing up with him once again... Thanks for the review, more to come soon!
I'm not sure how I feel about this one, tbh. I just don't really buy it, I suppose. Like, maybe I'm just in denial or something, but I feel like if I use a fingernail to scratch at the veneer, as it were, something else will reveal itself... A good update, in any case, even if current situation has me disgruntled with just about everyone involved. Author's Response: Thank you for taking your time to write a review even in the middle of disgruntledness :-) Action is a rather difficult genre to write, I think - or it simply does not agree with me, specifically. I needed something drastic to happen in the story, though - a crisis to bring Harry and Snape closer together. It doesn't look like that right now, but bear with it another chapter or two and I hope it will make more sense.
Author's Response: Strange, yes I know - I needed a little action to animate the story. It easily gets a bit weird though - the action genre is not as straight forward as you'd like to think...
Author's Response: Yes, they are truly at a suffocatingly high altitude at the moment being - as they will become all too aware of in the next chapter...
Author's Response: Thank you for the review and thank you for enjoying the story! As you can see, the setting in this story is mostly cannon, so when I started to fantasise how a reconciliation between Snape and Harry would realistically take place, I thought that making Harry more studious was an important requisite, because that was in my mind a way for Snape and Harry to find common ground and a way for Snape to - finally - start respecting Harry. I also thought that it would make sense that getting rid of Voldemort’s horcrux would affect Harry in some way - not his true personality, no, but in this case his ability to concentrate. Then I also think that in real life people often change a lot in their late teens - the childhood tastes and choices mature and an irresponsible youth might suddenly become studious… Thanks for appreciating :-) |
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