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Reviews For Spiral of Trust
Title: Chapter 43 Awakening of inanimate objects 03 Nov 2015 5:55 am
Reviewer: aurtrina (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh! Good story. Looking forward to more

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Next chapter's up now :-)
Title: Chapter 43 Awakening of inanimate objects 29 Oct 2015 11:55 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. I didn't see that coming. Very exciting chapter. I'll be looking forward to finding out what happens next.

    Author's Response: Snape's past is cathing up with him once again... Thanks for the review, more to come soon!
Title: Chapter 43 Awakening of inanimate objects 29 Oct 2015 10:37 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Rather convenient timing for Dumbles to be waking up again, indeed. *grumbles about twinkly-eyed interfering fools*

    I'm not sure how I feel about this one, tbh. I just don't really buy it, I suppose. Like, maybe I'm just in denial or something, but I feel like if I use a fingernail to scratch at the veneer, as it were, something else will reveal itself...

    A good update, in any case, even if current situation has me disgruntled with just about everyone involved.

    Author's Response: Thank you for taking your time to write a review even in the middle of disgruntledness :-) Action is a rather difficult genre to write, I think - or it simply does not agree with me, specifically. I needed something drastic to happen in the story, though - a crisis to bring Harry and Snape closer together. It doesn't look like that right now, but bear with it another chapter or two and I hope it will make more sense.
Title: Chapter 43 Awakening of inanimate objects 29 Oct 2015 8:53 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a strange turn of events!

    Author's Response: Strange, yes I know - I needed a little action to animate the story. It easily gets a bit weird though - the action genre is not as straight forward as you'd like to think...
Title: Chapter 43 Awakening of inanimate objects 29 Oct 2015 10:51 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great cliffhanger - literally ... Interesting turn of events. Harry and Severus are in a terrible position. Looking forward to reading about how they get out of it.

    Author's Response: Yes, they are truly at a suffocatingly high altitude at the moment being - as they will become all too aware of in the next chapter...
Title: Chapter 43 Awakening of inanimate objects 29 Oct 2015 9:33 am
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    No! Not the cloak! I'm hopelessly addicted to this by the way; a really well written fic. I especially appreciate the studious side of Harry; in the book he had seemed like this mediocre student who gets by on talent and luck without significant effort. Lovely!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the review and thank you for enjoying the story! As you can see, the setting in this story is mostly cannon, so when I started to fantasise how a reconciliation between Snape and Harry would realistically take place, I thought that making Harry more studious was an important requisite, because that was in my mind a way for Snape and Harry to find common ground and a way for Snape to - finally - start respecting Harry. I also thought that it would make sense that getting rid of Voldemort’s horcrux would affect Harry in some way - not his true personality, no, but in this case his ability to concentrate. Then I also think that in real life people often change a lot in their late teens - the childhood tastes and choices mature and an irresponsible youth might suddenly become studious… Thanks for appreciating :-)


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