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Reviews For Spiral of Trust
Title: Chapter 32 The nauseating intentionality of an Avada Kedavra 27 Jun 2015 5:44 pm
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it:) Awesome to see Snape so worried for Harry :) Can't wait for more!
Title: Chapter 31 Dead wizards do not Apparate 22 Jun 2015 6:21 am
Reviewer: RLara (Signed) [Report This]
    Huh. It's so ironic that Harry ended up actually killing someone when he had such difficulty with the Avadas in the beginning. Must be quite weird and troubling for him... Does Snape remember?

    I wish they'd just go back to Hogwarts and all but I sort of want to know all that happened inside the nightclub..

    Hope you're able to post more soon, this is one of my favourite fics.
    Have a nice vacation! =]

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review. I’m glad that you enjoy my story! There will be a few more chapters that will take place at the Ministry of Magic and at St Mungo’s, but eventually they will of course return to Hogwarts. Snape remembers Harry’s difficulties with the AK at the beginning of the story - I am thrilled that you do as well, as the next chapter builds on those experiences from the first chapters of the book.


Title: Chapter 31 Dead wizards do not Apparate 19 Jun 2015 9:57 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very dramatic chapter. I'm not sure about Harry killing, he hated doing an imperious in DH so not sure if he could but great chapter

    Author's Response:

    I am happy you caught up with me and left me your reviews - they are always appreciated! The chapter I am posting now will hold a discussion about Avada Kedavras. You’re right - it was very hard for Harry to do it. 


Title: Chapter 30 A holiday goes awry 19 Jun 2015 9:25 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the Paris interlude thank you
Title: Chapter 29 An ordinary vacation trip 19 Jun 2015 2:12 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Shows he does care even if it is only the wasted years of protecting him! Great chter and tension thank you
Title: Chapter 28 Precautions and Preparations 19 Jun 2015 11:32 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much for your fast updating as you can see I can't keep up with you!
Title: Chapter 31 Dead wizards do not Apparate 18 Jun 2015 5:13 pm
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    Though I completely understand Harry's instinct to get back to the UK, he did mess up big time by fleeing custody. I wonder how that will play out. There's got to be come consequences to that I'd imagine. Like not being accepted into the Auror program at the very least.

    I hope you have a great vacation!

    Author's Response:

    I’m afraid the consequences of the attack in Paris and Harry’s AK will need a few more chapters to sort out. It will be complicated - but I kind of like that :-) 

     

    I had a great vacation, by the way - I hadn’t been abroad for a long time and it’s always sort of refreshing to realise that everyday life can play out in slightly different ways than at home, and still be just fine!


Title: Chapter 30 A holiday goes awry 17 Jun 2015 7:11 am
Reviewer: retaco (Signed) [Report This]
    You are evil... How could you leave it like that? How often do you update? So far I've read it from the beginning... It's always bad when you are getting into the story and finally catch up to what has been posting. I'm loving the story so far and hoping it doesn't take too long for the update. Reyes

    Author's Response: I'm happy to have a new reader review my story and glad that you like it! I updated just NOW! I generally do weekly updates - one or two chapters at a time. Enjoy :-)
Title: Chapter 30 A holiday goes awry 15 Jun 2015 8:23 pm
Reviewer: Buchling (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love Paris too, so I really liked this chapter. I also found your description of Ginnys inability to grasp the muggle world intriguing. To not understand the concept of the grave of the Unknown Soldier you must live under a rock at the bottom of the sea or in the wizarding world. As she was never exposed to anything muggle it is very understandable, but also shows a rather severe void in the perception of the world. She sees magic as the only solution to explain a patio heater.... lol.
    However, it would be so great if Harry - in his scientific work - found a way to combine technology with incantations or something like that. Of course you can write whatever you want, I just think it would be a nice subplot to broaden the perception of all things muggle. Science has its own magic after all.
    Can’t wait for the next update, you are doing great.
    Also thanks for always giving detailed answers to the reviews, it must be a lot of additional work to do so.

    Author's Response:

    I truly enjoy the readers reviews, whether they are simply short, encouraging comments, or point out a mistake or an inconsistency in the text that I am eager to correct, or are longer reflections, like yours, on the magic and on the characters of the story. One may attempt to understand magic with a scientific approach - it’s probably in vain, but very fun to do so, so why not toy with the theories? Your idea to mix magic and (Muggle) science is really interesting. Arthur Weasley is actually working with ”Muggle artefacts”, isn’t he? Maybe Harry, with his advantage of being familiar with both worlds, could come up with some new invention? I’m afraid ’Spiral of Trust’ is already finished (approximately fifteen more chapters to go), so I will have difficulties to fit it in, however. And that is probably why I have the time to answer the reviews. I only need to proof-read each chapter thoroughly before posting it, but I guess that if you’re in the middle of a writing process, which is terribly time-consuming, it might be harder to do so. I enjoy getting answers to my reviews, anyhow, so that’s why I make an effort to answer yours :-)

Title: Chapter 6 Back at Hogwarts 15 Jun 2015 1:51 pm
Reviewer: elianam (Signed) [Report This]
    Its better and better.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I am happy to have a new reader review my story :-)

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