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Reviews For Spiral of Trust
Title: Chapter 14 Mind Soothing 25 Apr 2015 9:56 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW. How could they not realize what is going on from what Malfoy is saying and that poor boy listening to how his mother died? I hope someone hears Harry out! Great chapter. I love your Snape and I love your Harry - so in character!
Title: Chapter 16 The Spiral Case Knight´s Battle Move 25 Apr 2015 9:54 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, fantastic chapter! Haha using wands with their toes. I really love this development and exploration of theory and advanced magic. It is often missing from stories. Great job with this story!
Title: Chapter 18 A task for Mrs Weasley 25 Apr 2015 9:53 am
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter

    Author's Response: Thanks! It was nice to write a chapter that took place at the Burrow for a change.
Title: 17 The Double Knight’s Spiral Battle Move 25 Apr 2015 9:49 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy. So what is all that about? Did Snape publish the paper under his name deliberately? How come? I hope Harry gets to find out what;s really going on. i loved the descriptions of the Knight's double move and all that. Better than Quidditch? Wow. Thanks so much for the update!
Title: Chapter 18 A task for Mrs Weasley 25 Apr 2015 8:37 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter! I love it! Poor Snape, having his personal business plastered in the paper, what a slight of privacy! Poor Harry in the club too! I wonder if Harry should pose for photo ops with Snape - if that would help? I wonder what Harry and Hermione's idea is about. Something to do with Muggle born and Muggle raised children? A summer school, perhaps? to teach them about Magic. I suppose we shall see. :)

    Thanks so much for the update!

    Author's Response:

    Wow! That was a whole bunch of reviews - thanks for taking the time to write them all! It is really gratifying to have readers' (and writers') feed-back on the story! 

    Funny you should mention Harry posing for photo ops with Snape... You have an intuition for these things :-) You'll have to wait quite a substantial number of chapters before something like that might come up, though. And the task of Mrs Weasley will also be revealed towards the end of the story. In the meantime, I hope you will continue to enjoy yourself while reading!

Title: 17 The Double Knight’s Spiral Battle Move 23 Apr 2015 12:48 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a surprise. It doesn't seem like something Snape would do. He is already a potion's master and headmaster of Hogwarts so he doesn't need the notoriety. Looking forward to finding out what is going on.

    Author's Response: There's a bit of an explanation coming up in the next chapter. To hear Snape's point of view, you need to wait a little longer, though...
Title: 17 The Double Knight’s Spiral Battle Move 22 Apr 2015 10:30 pm
Reviewer: tb_ll57 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh wow, that was unexpected with the article! Great cliffhanger.

    I love all the magical theory in this. It's so fascinating and well-developed.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: 17 The Double Knight’s Spiral Battle Move 22 Apr 2015 9:24 pm
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fantatstic!!! Looking forward to much more!

    Author's Response: Thank you! And there will be much more :-)
Title: 17 The Double Knight’s Spiral Battle Move 22 Apr 2015 6:41 am
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm honestly not surprised in the least with the Snape you have built in this story. He would have no qualms about stealing someone else's work IMHO. Kinda throws into doubt all his other so-called accomplishments doesn't it?

    In fact, while reading the beginning part of this chapter, I was wondering why snape was acting so out of character by helping Harry :-)

    Great twist though.

    Can harry finally give up on him now? *dangerously close to whining* I think enough is enough. Harry is verging into doormat territory if he just accepts this and still defends Snape.

    Author's Response: *Whining back* You are so suspicious of Snape! You're supposed to be shocked, not to expect such behaviour from him! :-) Okay, I acknowledge that he is a difficult and ambivalent character, but wasn't that scene with Harry and Snape doing the Double Knight's Move just lovely? I agree with your analysis though that Harry is just a little too pliant and forgiving. But it's approaching saintly territory, not doormat! 
Title: Chapter 16 The Spiral Case Knight´s Battle Move 16 Apr 2015 9:33 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the new magicical entities but even more I love your Harry&Severus conversations they always have a good bite to them! Thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you, I enjoy writing those parts in particular - I'm glad that it shows.

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