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Reviews For Spiral of Trust
Title: Chapter 47 Shortcomings confessed and Reassurances offered 01 Dec 2015 10:09 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the ending very realistic. Thank you so much for a wonderful story and completing your story!

    Author's Response: Thank YOU for having been such a faithful reviewer from the very beginning when I started posting. It has been much appreciated!
Title: Chapter 47 Shortcomings confessed and Reassurances offered 01 Dec 2015 8:14 pm
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you so much for this wonderful Journey, it was a pleasure:)! Truly Amazing!! The idea of Grief swallowers was especially great and original. I hope you are planning a Sequel ;)

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for repeated reviewing throughout the story! I have enjoyed taking part of your reactions to the different events :-) I'm partivcularly glad that you approve of the Grief swallowers.
Title: Chapter 47 Shortcomings confessed and Reassurances offered 28 Nov 2015 10:01 am
Reviewer: Acop (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi :)

    I loved you story, how humans your characters are and reacts1. You really managed a believable post deathly hallows story and I must say I was happy to see Ginny and Harry disagreements because it felt a lot more real than there sudden love in the books.
    My only disappointment is that I want to see what happens next to Harry and Severus lol
    Last point, I love your Severus, he is perfect to me and you gave him much more depth than J.K. Rowling and he deserved it.
    I was not bothered by you writing style and believe me, I abandoned lots of stories because of it so don't sell yourself short :)
    Thank you for writing and hoping for a sequel ;)

    Author's Response: Hi! And thank you for the review! I loved to hear that you approve of the way I have developped the original characters. It is quite important to me that their actions are logical and psychologically believable. The greatness of JKR is that she inspired all us fan fic writers with her world - when all is said and done, it all still belongs to her :-) 
Title: Chapter 47 Shortcomings confessed and Reassurances offered 26 Nov 2015 12:21 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed the last chapter. The end of Harry's Hogwarts schooling was the logical place to end the story. I was also glad to see why Snape had been so standoffish towards Harry. It's nice that they finally have that straightened out and can, hopefully, become friends. I felt your story did a good job reflecting Rowling's world. The chapter about Paris seemed especially magical. As I said last chapter, I will look forward to your future writings.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your faithful reviewing throughout the story! Those reviews are what makes a writer keep on going and - maybe not writing the story, because you do that a lot for yourself, but taking the trouble to proofread and post the story. I'm so glad that you liked my take on Paris!
Title: Chapter 47 Shortcomings confessed and Reassurances offered 24 Nov 2015 11:22 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Pretty please cover Harry's training? I loved your story and all of the characters in it. Would love to see what fun and misadventures Harry and Company get into next!! Thank you for the wonderful story.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'll definitely think about a sequel - I already have some ideas :-) 
Title: Chapter 47 Shortcomings confessed and Reassurances offered 24 Nov 2015 8:59 pm
Reviewer: JCJ58 (Signed) [Report This]
    I have loved every chapter of this story. Perhaps, we could see some of Harry and Snape in which ever career Harry chooses.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Naturally I have ideas for a sequel where Harry enters either an Auror or a Healer's career (or both!), but it is the time-consuming process of writing that scares me a little, so I'll have to think about it. As it is also very awarding and satisfying to create stories, I'm sure I won't be able to resist coming up with new ones, though :-) 
Title: Chapter 47 Shortcomings confessed and Reassurances offered 24 Nov 2015 8:16 pm
Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi Henna, I followed this story from the beginning and I absolutely loved it! I can't really find the right words now... it is a brilliant, unique and original story, definitely one of my favorite novel-length ones. Thank you for writing and sharing it! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! - Your review warms my heart and boosts my writing ego :-)
Title: Chapter 47 Shortcomings confessed and Reassurances offered 24 Nov 2015 6:05 pm
Reviewer: Kickthemoon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It was an interesting story that did keep me tuning in. I was expecting Mrs Steadfast and Snape to get into a romantic tangle but probably for the best that that never happened. You've done incredibly well to write such a story and all in foreign language. In regards to language, it was the tone that i would suggest working. All in all, though, an enjoyable read.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for sharing your opinion of the story! I'm glad that you liked it and held on until the end. 

    I introduced Mrs Steadfast in the story mainly because I wanted a female character in a position of power who would take to and, in a way, protect both Snape and Harry (in that aspect Mrs Steadfast replaces Dumbledore in canon.) She also acts as a cushion when the two protagonists pick fights with one another and forces them to explain themselves to one another, so inadvertently or not, she helps them. I did intend to keep an open mind to a possible romantic relationship between Snape and her, but in the end it seemed that Snape still had not come to terms with what happened to Lily and his feelings for her, so even if Mrs Steadfast developped feelings for Snape, he is clearly not receptive yet.

Title: Chapter 47 Shortcomings confessed and Reassurances offered 24 Nov 2015 3:29 pm
Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed) [Report This]
    The ending made me tear so much. I'm so glad that they were both able to find comrades in one another and discuss Lily and find peace one last time. I almost wish Harry had kept the ressurection stone so that he could've let Severus use it in the moment.

    You did a brilliant job, sad to see this story over after all the time, but really happy it's now complete.

    Author's Response: Thank you for this and several reviews before! I have enjoyed the spontaneous character of them and I agree with you: Severus would have needed some sort of closure with Lily, for his own well-being, because as it is now, it still affects him way too much, but maybe a friendship with Harry might help him overcome that?
Title: Chapter 47 Shortcomings confessed and Reassurances offered 24 Nov 2015 1:28 pm
Reviewer: Hobesan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Not sure this will go through. I Loved this story! I hope you write more.

    Author's Response: It came through alright :-) Thank you for taking your time to send me your review. I'm so glad that you liked the story.

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