Ooh, very, very intriguing. I love the concept, and it feels very much like Christmas. I am looking forward to seeing how all of this works out, and what Severus will see in Christmas past.
Lovely prologue with the wintry backdrop, and the sense of foreboding in the question that Lily asked Severus. There's a sense of promise and hope, and yet that something bad is going to happen. It works very well.
wow!!!
impresionante!!!
por favor publica pronto!!
por favor!!!
| Title: Broken Promises
| 14 Nov 2014 11:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Sissi (Signed)
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Hey!
This story seems very nice and I absolutely love the way Lily behaves!:D
Please update soon!
Love
Sissi
wonder which Christmas past hes going to see.
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