Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 2 12 Dec 2014 6:42 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    The death eater raid at the World Cup camp was scary. Severus was obviously terrified over Harry's safety. I guess it was good that he didn't go with Harry. If he had been seen with Harry or the Weasleys, it would have blown his cover. It was nice to see him react like a frightened father to the extent that he let Sirius stay for the week. That seems like something he would only do for Harry.

    Author's Response: Exactly, he did it for Harry, even though he hated the puppy dog there :) But he's getting used to their little dog
Title: Chapter 1 07 Dec 2014 3:43 pm
Reviewer: slytherinhrw (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww i love the love is... series. and love the Snape/Harry father son relationship but for some reason, idk why, I never liked the Snape is Harry's bio father stories but love the adopted father son ones.

    Author's Response: the snape is harry's bio father sotries are mostly far darker than the adoption ones. For an adoption you need to make a conscious decision and have the will to take a child as yours. a biological relationship does not automatically mean that someone loves you or wants you, so there is more space to play around with darker themes and angst. Maybe that's why you like them less?
Title: Chapter 1 24 Nov 2014 12:12 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent start thank you for continuing the series

    Author's Response: Its for reviewers like you that it has been continued: thanks for your support!
Title: Chapter 1 22 Nov 2014 5:39 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a good, long first chapter. I'm glad that Snape is still visiting Sinestra. It seems like it might be some time (if ever) till they develop more of a relationship though. That could be a good thing. It's better to get to know each other first. I like the way the three men in Harry's life are getting along. They all seem more concerned with Harry's welfare than any past grudges. Poor Harry. The dream must have been terrifying. At least he had a good time with Remus and Sirius before that.

    Author's Response:

    thank you for your review. Yeah, I plan to make Aurora suffer :D It will take time for Sev to get it and then to get over himself. If ever.

    I really want to explore in this story how important it is to have a support network besides your immediate family. That's were Harrys friends, the Weasleys and his godfathers come into play.

    I overplayed the dream a bit, I think in the real version Harry did not see Nagini eat the old man. But I needed to terify Harry, so yeah...


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