| Title: Confession
| 27 Jan 2016 7:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
Message for Dumbledore:
"Let's drop some oil on this motherfu-"
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Why do I feel like Dumbledore is still going to attack Sev?
Author's Response: I think he'll leave Snape alone. At least until he'll have something else to blame on him.
I’m so very glad that you’ve got back to writing this story again - I have been waiting, impatiently, for it to be updated :-)
Although Draco’s action was inadmissible and that I feel almost as outraged as Snape with him, you did provide an explanation - the jealousy, the impulse - that was plausible, and almost benign. More aggravating, though, was that he never told anyone afterwards, and that he even met the blind Harry without regretting what he had done and boasted about his actions - that speaks of a more serious form of cruelty and lack of conscience, I think, than if he had repented immediately.
It was a really good chapter anyway. The description of the effects of the Visionara were hair-raising! Very imaginative and chilling at the same time.
Author's Response: I think that Draco did repent for what he did immediately after the poisoning but he was too much of a coward to admit it. I pictured him hesitating outside Snape's door many times, his conscience demanding that he admit his guilt but his fear of Snape's anger would win every time. When he came to the manor, he found that Snape had grown to care for his nemesis, the boy who rejected his friendship. This inflamed his jealous nature and lead him to taunt Harry. I know that this isn't an excuse for Draco's behaviour but he's a very conflicted person. He has darker shades of grey in his character than either Snape or Harry.
I'm incredibly glad that you're still interested in this story. Your reviews are always a delighful read. Not only are your words a great encouragement but your observations are very insightful and great for getting me thinking. I plan to start writing a bit more now that I'm back on track with my studies. As always, thanks so much for reviewing!
Now that all of that is cleared up. Its time for Dumbledore to get his head out of his ass.
Author's Response: Dumbledore realised he's been a big idiot. Perhaps in the future, he won't be so quick to jump to conclusions.
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