| Title: Goroth's Doom
| 27 Jan 2016 7:39 pm
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Very good chapter thank you
| Title: A Perilous Plan
| 26 Jan 2016 10:33 pm
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Thank you an excellent chapter
| Title: A Promise
| 26 Jan 2016 8:59 pm
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Loved the conversation taking place in the creepy potion lab it made it very atmospheric thank you
| Title: A Friendly Game
| 26 Jan 2016 5:21 pm
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Very clever I loved the dragon!thank you.
| Title: Unexpected Gifts
| 26 Jan 2016 5:08 pm
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Thank you an interesting chapter
| Title: Getting Along
| 26 Jan 2016 3:20 pm
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Don't like snakes but love the story thank you
I hate Dumbledore so much
| Title: Defense Lessons
| 25 Jan 2016 10:41 pm
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Good for Harry but he should be yelling at Dumbledore
If that's true then Dumbledore is really stupid. You shouldn't ever trifle with death. It will always come back to bite you right in the ass.
Thank you for the update! The scene with Draco Malfoy waiting for his parents gave an interesting background on his person. I’m feeling sorry for him, and his jealousy of Harry is more understandable, yet still condonable.
This thing with James coming back is downright scary… He seems like a blunt and rush man, and the foreboding you have managed to create is that there is definitely a dark side to him and that there is no good coming out of his returning to life! I am left with a feeling of apprehension.
Favourite part in this chapter was when Snape got upset about Harry’s objections to the physical restraining of insane persons, how he insulted Harry, how quickly he regretted it and how quickly Harry forgave him. It shows that they have come a long way since the start of this story. (The subject itself is complex - physical restraints or drugs to calm a psychotic person? When does ”caring” cause more harm than good?)
I’m already looking forward to the next chapter :-)
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