This was adorable!!!! I love love love love loveeedddd it! Perhaps a few more one shots of future scenes? That would be so heart melting to read! :) Great job!
Author's Response: I thought no one had read this, because I didn't get any notification that there had been a review. I was just about to delete the story. I am so glad to hear that you enjoyed reading this, and I do rather like the idea of these four being a family. I would love to write more for this particular universe. Thank you so much!
Great snippet of family life! The boys are wonderfully believable, behaviorwise, and the backstory works well. I had to laugh at the five wide-eyed children after the potions accident-- you might consider writing that entire scene for a future story! Nice job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading this, and for taking the time to offer me some feedback. I am contemplating adding more to this particular 'universe'; I wasn't sure if anyone would be interested in it. Thank you!
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