| Title: I Can Tell That We Are Going to Be Friends
| 25 Jan 2016 8:08 pm
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| Reviewer: tess4aria (Signed)
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Fantastic chapter. You are a really great storyteller! Can't wait for more!
Another wonderful chapter. I was so happy to see it. I'm glad that Dumbledore's words made Severus decide to open up more to the people who want to know him better. I'm glad that Pauline was willing to give him another chance. The unicorn keeper sounds interesting. Looking forward to finding out what happens next.
| Title: I Can Tell That We Are Going to Be Friends
| 24 Jan 2016 10:52 pm
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| Reviewer: JCJ58 (Signed)
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This is just a wonderful story. You write so well, and the story flows. Looking forward to more!
| Title: I Can Tell That We Are Going to Be Friends
| 24 Jan 2016 9:57 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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I like how Snape is becoming more social.
| Title: Chances
| 27 Dec 2015 4:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Izzie (Anonymous)
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Oh, so he got Polly. Nice! :) I hope that will work out. :D
It's still hurting to read, tho. With James and Lily not being alive and Harrys siblings never alive at all... :( I miss Millie and Grace and Sirius jr and Mike and everyone...they were precious.
I'm glad that Snape took a step towards Harry and Sirius tho. There's a chance now. :)
Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
Yay! So glad Sev has made progress with Harry and Pauline! I kinda want to smack Albus upside his head for ruining his good day!! ;)
| Title: Chances
| 02 Apr 2015 8:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good I loved the incident over the mouse and agree with Pauline! But how mean of you to link that with the curse! Mean but very clever, thank you
I just stumbled upon this story and Visions and I'm captivated!
The happiness and angst are so well done. Harry, Sirius and Severus are all broken and I can't wait to see if/when they can be healed.
LOL, I love Severus's awkwardness with pauline.
| Title: Chances
| 01 Apr 2015 3:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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Thank you for this wonderful story! It is heartbreaking, but in a good way.
I'm glad Severus finally connected with Pauline. Though the mouse scene made me laugh - I had something similar with my husband when we were dating. I hadn't expected Dumbledore to have been cursed by the ring yet though. That was a surprise.
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