| Title: The Letter
| 11 Nov 2020 6:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Oh my gosh. Harry has to kill his "father" or be disowned... That's not cool james but also screw you Snape! (Although partly I think maybe Lily lied but idk enough yet, maybe Snape really did rape her, it just doesn't seem like him) gosh it never said how far Harry needs to go. To satisfy the natqah does he need to kill Snape? Would it be enough to let Voldemort know of snapes spy status-- he'd certainly be tortured or even killed for it! Or does Harry have to do something hands on like stab Snape in the heart. Or poisoning, would that work or be too passive? Oh james you can't send a 16 year old boy on a revenge mission with no instructions but to trust Dumbledore (cause yeah Dumbledore *isn't* that trustworthy or James and Lily would still be alive)
| Title: The Letter
| 26 Aug 2018 2:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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| Title: The Letter
| 21 Feb 2005 4:58 am
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| Reviewer: Nefla (Anonymous)
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Gah! I love your writing so much! It's extremely rare to find such a good fanfiction ^.^ I feel totally in the moment when I'm reading it, and there are no glaring errors or anything stupid to force my way through. You've taken an overdone concept and made it original, I give you a "10"
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