Wow! I liked this story. A little dark more than I like, but it felt real.
Thank you!
| Title: The First Step
| 11 Nov 2020 8:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Idk I liked the manipulative scheming harry- have Dumbledore destroy his letter and basically blame james isn't sitting right with me 😤🤷 but whatever
| Title: The First Step
| 26 Aug 2018 10:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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This story had a very interesting and unique concept with the curse on the letter. I liked Harry's thoughts when he realized what James had done. I'm glad that those feelings were from James and not entirely harry.
| Title: The First Step
| 30 Jun 2010 7:47 am
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| Reviewer: Jo (Anonymous)
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Fantastic!1 You're a riveting writer. I've enjoyed reading both parts. Thanks.
Haha very interesting ending! I liked the piece and I was really worried at first until I realized there would be a sequel! Excellent! I like the way you threw in the detail about Fawkes and why a feather wouldn't work!
Author's Response: I wasn't intending to write a sequel when I wrote this one, but once I had got the fanfic bug I couldn't help myself. I did 7 sequels in the end (most of them are on ffnet cos they don't fit into the P&S categories). Thanks for the review.
Boy, you really made me dislike Harry in this story. Even knowing that James had treated the letter parchment with the Obligatus curse still makes me feel as negatively about him as Severus must.
| Title: The First Step
| 30 Sep 2005 8:51 am
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| Reviewer: khaosfire (Anonymous)
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I ::really:: liked chapters one through twelve.
| Title: The First Step
| 21 Feb 2005 8:08 am
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| Reviewer: Nefla (Anonymous)
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Hey, what ever happened to the bear-babies? They were so cute! I think this story is one of my favorites ^.^
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Perhaps I'll try and work those pesky Dranda Bears in somewhere else... Not exactly sure what they can do though... Actually, now I come to think of it, they do get a reference in Lost Perspective 5.... but hardly a starring role! (If you read any of my others, 'Snape's Confession' and 'Post Mortem' are more serious, 'Repercussions' and 'Deck the Halls' rather more whacky... They're still on FFnet at the moment.
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