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Reviews For 'Ohana
Title: Aloha 31 Mar 2022 12:20 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I seriously enjoyed this! It was great - moving, unique, and so well done.
Title: Aloha 25 Mar 2015 2:19 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow!!!

    esta idea es hermosa,

    he de confesar que no estaba muy segura con lode Hawai, pero decidí darle una oportunidad, y que maravilloso tiempo que he tenido en la lectura

    amo como has retratado los sentimientos,
    y realmente me emociono que hayas decidio darle dislexia a Harry,

    impresioante historia

    Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am glad that you are enjoying this story, in spite of it being set in Hawaii. I actually live in Hawaii, and I also like the characters on the show, "Hawaii Five-0". I hope that, as the story continues, you will continue to enjoy reading it. Mahalo
Title: Aloha 24 Mar 2015 6:30 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    I was totally waiting for Lilo and Stitch's line of "Ohana means family. Family Means no one gets left behind"

    Author's Response: Maybe I'll work that line into the story sometime. It is common for people to say that here. Thank you so much for reading!
Title: Aloha 15 Mar 2015 4:47 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, glad that he got what he wanted finally, a family , and that Snape was responsible for it.

    Author's Response: Thank you :-) 
Title: Aloha 05 Feb 2015 1:57 am
Reviewer: A-zla (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome story! Everyone was very much in character. I really hope that you write a sequel - I'd love to know more about Harry's summer in Hawaii

    Author's Response: I am working on a sequel, though it's slow going. I really appreciate the support, and encouragement, and am glad that you liked this and thought everyone was in character. 
Title: Aloha 01 Feb 2015 10:51 am
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fantastic! I nreally like it! More would be great though;)

    Author's Response: I have been working on more for this particular story. I'm glad to hear that you're interested in reading more. Thank you. 
Title: Aloha 01 Feb 2015 9:37 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't event watch Hawaii Five-0 and usually stray away from cross overs. But that was really something else.

    Super cute! Good job.

    Author's Response: Thanks for giving this a try, even though you don't typically read crossovers and are unfamiliar with Hawaii Five-0. I am glad that you thought this was cute, and that you thought I did a good job on it. I appreciate the feedback. 
Title: Aloha 31 Jan 2015 4:02 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwww, yay! I wish this were more than a one-shot but it was a nice picture of what could of been. I love your Snape, and all the emotions Harry went through. Great one shot.

    Author's Response: Thanks. I've been asked to make this longer than a one shot over at A03, and fan fiction. net. I may very well do that. I'm working on a couple of different scenes for expanding the story. I'm glad that you liked this. Thank you so much!
Title: Aloha 31 Jan 2015 7:03 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oh very nice I so would love to see sequel to this I wonder if you would be willing to write one please...

    Author's Response: I've gotten a lot of response to this story over at A03, and fan fiction. net, so I am working on expanding the story. Writing in general is a little slow in coming for me at the moment, but I do have an additional scene written for the story, and the start of another. Thank you for letting me know that you'd be interested in a sequel to this. 

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