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Reviews For 'Ohana
Title: Aloha 24 Mar 2015 6:30 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    I was totally waiting for Lilo and Stitch's line of "Ohana means family. Family Means no one gets left behind"

    Author's Response: Maybe I'll work that line into the story sometime. It is common for people to say that here. Thank you so much for reading!
Title: Nightmares and Chamomile Tea 23 Mar 2015 10:20 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm so glad you decided to continue this story! I'll look forward to seeing how Harry's summer plays out! (And I may have to try this version of chamomile tea. I've always drunk it plain!)

    Author's Response: I love honey and milk in chamomile tea. It is very soothing, and quite delicious (at least I find it to be so). I hope that future snapshots of Harry's summer will come a little quicker. Thank you so much!
Title: Nightmares and Chamomile Tea 23 Mar 2015 8:56 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great blending of the two fandoms.

    Author's Response: Thank you. It was tricky, and there were a couple of moments where I almost abandoned the story, because I worried that it wouldn't work. 
Title: Nightmares and Chamomile Tea 23 Mar 2015 7:50 pm
Reviewer: InuChan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It makes me happy to read this.

    Author's Response: Thank you! :D Your words make me smile. 
Title: Nightmares and Chamomile Tea 23 Mar 2015 4:42 pm
Reviewer: lovingguest (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was absolutely perfect and made smile. This had everything I like: Severus helping Harry, loving and funny McDanno and Harry getting a loving family.

    Seriously, you made a really good job writing this. You made me smile.

    Thanks for sharing :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that this made you smile, and that you liked everything that was in it. McDanno are really hamming it up for me, it would seem, and they're kind of fun to write in this fashion (my other stories featuring them paint them in a much more serious light). Thank you so much for the lovely feedback. 
Title: Nightmares and Chamomile Tea 23 Mar 2015 3:30 pm
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    I have nothing bad to say about this i so adore fluff. I do miss Sev however. But the only bad thing about this, I suppose was I found myself getting to the end really soon..maybe the first chapter sppiled me lol. Good work either way.

    Author's Response: I am planning on making the rest of the story a collection of snapshots of Harry's summer. The first 'chapter' was actually a one-shot for a challenge of one-shots, but then, because a number of people requested more, I decided to add to it. The first 'chapter' is longer, because it's meant to be a full short story, which can vary in length. I estimate the the rest of the chapters will be around the length of this one. Hopefully that will not be off-putting. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, I appreciate them. There will be more Severus, because I rather love him. 
Title: Nightmares and Chamomile Tea 23 Mar 2015 1:37 pm
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so happy you made this into more than a oneshot!

    Author's Response: Thank you. I'm thinking it'll be loosely connected snapshots of Harry's summer. 
Title: Aloha 15 Mar 2015 4:47 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, glad that he got what he wanted finally, a family , and that Snape was responsible for it.

    Author's Response: Thank you :-) 
Title: Aloha 05 Feb 2015 1:57 am
Reviewer: A-zla (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome story! Everyone was very much in character. I really hope that you write a sequel - I'd love to know more about Harry's summer in Hawaii

    Author's Response: I am working on a sequel, though it's slow going. I really appreciate the support, and encouragement, and am glad that you liked this and thought everyone was in character. 
Title: Aloha 01 Feb 2015 10:51 am
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fantastic! I nreally like it! More would be great though;)

    Author's Response: I have been working on more for this particular story. I'm glad to hear that you're interested in reading more. Thank you. 

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