Title: The Generosity of the Poor
| 02 Apr 2015 11:25 pm
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Reviewer: tb_ll57 (Anonymous)
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Poor Wolverhampton! I've only been through on the train. But the description of Snape's house was great, very vivid, and I liked the small touch about the grated windows and Harry wishing he had decor for the walls. Interesting so far and looking forward to the next chapters!
Author's Response: Oh, do tell me what you saw on the train in a subsequent review! I'm just an American, and I did some research that turned up something like "Wolverhampton declaired worst city in Great Britain" or something like that, so that's why I picked it. I described what I've seen in my city, and hoped it would be about the same. I don't live in a bad area, but I don't have to drive hardly a half hour to get to one.
Title: The Generosity of the Poor
| 13 Mar 2015 10:16 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A good start very vivid description of Spinners End
Nice first chapter. You did a good job describing Spinner's End. No wonder Snape was hesitant about having Harry stay with him rather than at Hogwarts. I can see why Severus hasn't put too much time and effort into the house. If it is in a bad area, any visable renovations might attract burglars. Still, Harry may be able to do a bit of cleaning and fixing up during the summer. He got enough practice at the Dursleys.'
Author's Response: There's that point about renovating the house, and also the house is meant to reflect Snape's mental state. And just as Harry fixes up the house a bit, he'll also be helping Snape heal mentally as well. :)
Title: The Generosity of the Poor
| 08 Feb 2015 9:57 am
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Reviewer: Serious (Anonymous)
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MORE!!! I realy enjoy this. Cant wait to se waht they do wiht the house.
Title: The Generosity of the Poor
| 07 Feb 2015 8:50 am
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Reviewer: Snapefan (Anonymous)
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I WANT MORE! Right away please!
Title: The Generosity of the Poor
| 07 Feb 2015 8:46 am
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Reviewer: Mister (Anonymous)
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Love it. Can't wait to read more. Already one of my favourites.
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