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Reviews For A True Family
Title: Chapter 1: Finding Family 25 Feb 2020 8:58 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting start, I know this was not your start so I won’t say anything more.

    Author's Response:

    I know that the chapter is a little rough. I hope that you give the story a chance. Since I adopted the story, I kept the first chapter and made the second to the now is all mine. 

     

    Thank you for taking the time to read this rough chapter.  

Title: Chapter 1: Finding Family 21 Sep 2015 11:54 am
Reviewer: SHallow (Signed) [Report This]
    This story needs a lot more work.... It has a fair train of thought, but it is not up to par by my reckonings

    Author's Response:

    As this story was adopted from someone else, I agree that the first chapter was rough around the edges. I'm sorry it was not to your standards, but I do appreciate that you took the time and at least read a chapter. The next chapters I did put my spin on them, but I completely understand if you do not want to give it any more of your time.

    Thank you for taking the time to give my story a chance. I hope that this one story will not dissuade you from reading my other stories.

    <Mandancie>


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