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Reviews For Coals of Fire
I really like this story! The angst is great, and I hope Harry and Severus can end up being a good thing for each other.
i like that you give Snape the imprisonment of being abused/well the way it encloses him? I really hope he doesn't tell Harry, you shouldn't tell someone who is your child smth like this. Like explain ofc. But not like an adult needs/or Harry needs to tell himself, or just well not put that person in a spot were they have to become therapeutics.but ofc it is yours alone, and not everything depicted in ficzion is going to be the best advisable action. Anyway I hope you are continously going to be better, and I hope you finish this story (but ofc also you do not need to!) and I like your other stories as well.
Author's Response: Long reviews are thrilling to me as an author. Your previous review was also influential in me writing this chapter. Glad the Sirius arc isn't turning you off and you see it's not just intended to be bashing. Dumbledore isn't a bad person in this one...but reading someone's mind never seemed to be below him in canon either. I do believe I have read Slave Child. I think that one inspired this one. I do actually have a plan about how their relationship will evolve, so it is unlikely that I will abandon this story completely at any time. Thanks, my life is going well. I'm getting married in two weeks! :)
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