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Reviews For Coals of Fire
Title: Peeling Off the Scab 19 Nov 2023 5:56 pm
Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed) [Report This]

    I really like this story! The angst is great, and I hope Harry and Severus can end up being a good thing for each other.

Title: Peeling Off the Scab 15 Jun 2019 7:01 am
Reviewer: Penname_xxxx (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi,
    i like that you give Snape the imprisonment of being abused/well the way it encloses him?
    I really hope he doesn't tell Harry, you shouldn't tell someone who is your child smth like this. Like explain ofc. But not like an adult needs/or Harry needs to tell himself, or just well not put that person in a spot were they have to become therapeutics.but ofc it is yours alone, and not everything depicted in ficzion is going to be the best advisable action.
    Anyway I hope you are continously going to be better, and I hope you finish this story (but ofc also you do not need to!) and I like your other stories as well.
Title: Peeling Off the Scab 27 Nov 2018 8:31 am
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    I'd like to see what happens when Snape finds out Harry's (presumably) already been through something similar, based on what you inferred in the earlier chapters.
Title: Peeling Off the Scab 31 Oct 2018 11:33 pm
Reviewer: neytiri (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a fantasic story, please continue
Title: Peeling Off the Scab 29 Jul 2018 3:49 am
Reviewer: waitingondaisies (Signed) [Report This]
    hello it's me again! i finally checked the email attached to this account and let me tell you, seeing i had an email essentially from you gave me a bit of a heart attack. i am so so so grateful that you not only responded to my review, but you wrote another chapter. literally i loved this chapter so much it really assuages the ache in my heart left by the other chapters (just a little tho, im still very thirsty for another chapter). anyways. bad!sirius isn't usually my thing, but you handle it well enough that it's not like bashing for the sake of bashing you know? like sirius being bad is a part of the plot and not just something for kicks, and im really interested to see him get his comeuppance. while a part of me is mad at dumbledore for violating severus's privacy by reading sirius's mind, i am really really glad i don't have to suffer through dumbledore exhibiting any degree of distrust in severus which would just be painful, you know? also i am really happy to see that things are looking up for severus and harry's relationship, though i spent most of this chapter pretending the conditions of the slavery are more like kristin hudson's slave child (which if you haven't read, you absolutely should it's incredible) because i really really want them to be able to gradually transition to a paternal relationship and just help both of them heal and i still don't really see a way to that with the conditions of your slavery unless it's like a bittersweet kinda thing where harry is still very much severus's slave but they have the relationship that i want them to have. idk if this is the kind of review you want but as a writer it's the kind of review i'd be thrilled to get so uh i guess you're getting it anyways? but um yeah to sum things up: this chapter was excellent, i love you so much for coming back to this story at all (unconditional love too, i'll still love you for posting this chapter even if you never post another) and i hope ur life is going well

    Author's Response: Long reviews are thrilling to me as an author.  Your previous review was also influential in me writing this chapter.  Glad the Sirius arc isn't turning you off and you see it's not just intended to be bashing.  Dumbledore isn't a bad person in this one...but reading someone's mind never seemed to be below him in canon either.  I do believe I have read Slave Child.  I think that one inspired this one.  I do actually have a plan about how their relationship will evolve, so it is unlikely that I will abandon this story completely at any time.  Thanks, my life is going well.  I'm getting married in two weeks!  :)
Title: Peeling Off the Scab 24 Jul 2018 10:01 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Serves Sirius right what a bastard! I love the way the relationship is developing and how Severus is with Harry, thank you for updating
Title: Peeling Off the Scab 22 Jul 2018 9:24 pm
Reviewer: Keyli (Signed) [Report This]
    It is a wonderful fanfic, thank you! I am waiting for a next chapter
Title: Peeling Off the Scab 20 Jul 2018 4:28 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor, poor Sev...
Title: Peeling Off the Scab 18 Jul 2018 1:07 am
Reviewer: bootstring (Signed) [Report This]
    Ha, serves Sirius right.

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