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Reviews For Coals of Fire
Looking forward to reading more. Author's Response: Well, Snape already realizes he'll have a hard time telling Harry that his relatives were wrong to beat him when he's going to have to turn around and beat Harry himself. Anyway, they'll get some issues straightened out eventually.
Author's Response: I love warm and fuzzies, thank you! ^_^
I have some questions again though and hope I am not a bother. Harry can't have a snack in between without approval, let's say an apple or piece of chocolat? What about drinking water on a hot day? What if Snapes dozes off during the the day and Harry is not leashed; does that force a beating? Can Snape decide to magically prevent Harry from attacking him and thus forgo the leash? Can he decide to punish in other ways than corporal? Will they at one point in the story work through the whys and hows they came to hate each other? Author's Response: No, questions are good! You're not a bother. :) You're right, Harry can't have a snack without approval. I suppose that would extend to water as well, though I hadn't given it much thought. If there is any time that Snape is sleeping when Harry is not restrained, the bond will have a fit, yes. Snape could forgo the leash, say, if he put Harry in a body binding spell; is that better than a leash though? Harry can at least move a little bit on the leash. Snape doesn't know if non-corporal punishment will work. There's a reason for that. Definitely, they'll work through a lot of things. It won't always be bleak and hopeless, though it will be that way for awhile.
Author's Response: If everyone cooperates - *glares at Harry and Severus* - next chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you like it! My beta sent that chapter back about three times I think, telling me that Severus was getting too fluffy. Finally, "Okay, fine, I'll make him the biggest jerk!" Then she said it was good. I'll try to update regularly. School likes to stop that theory though.
The chapter was great and I like very much your way of writing, and psychological reasoning.. Hoping, that you will update :) I hope for
Author's Response: THERE'S A THING CALLED LIFE THAT'S STOPPING ME ATM. I'LL WRITE MORE AS SOON AS I GET ON SPRING BREAK NEXT WEEK. I'm glad you like the story. :)
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