Title: A Promise He Could Trust
| 02 Jul 2020 7:03 pm
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Reviewer: Ann (Signed)
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Title: A Promise He Could Trust
| 16 Jun 2015 7:49 am
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Reviewer: PharaohsLoyalMagician (Anonymous)
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This was wonderfully well written. It flowed seamlessly. I really do hope that you turn this into a story. You're a brilliant writer. Cheers and ta for writing and posting this.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that means a lot :)
Title: A Promise He Could Trust
| 13 Mar 2015 7:35 pm
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Reviewer: crotia (Anonymous)
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Cute story
Author's Response: thanks :)
Title: A Promise He Could Trust
| 23 Feb 2015 10:21 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very well written and well thought out story. I hope you decide to continue the story
Author's Response: Thanks! Aha I do have plans to continue this story, so hopefully there'll be a new story soon :)
Definitly interested in more! Good story
Author's Response: (Like I basically said to everyone before you XD) there will definitely be more to this. Thanks :)
Great start :) I would love to read more. I would wonder what Severus will do to well everyone that has harmed Harry including himself. I hope you do in fact decide to make it into a full story :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I don't want to give too much away, because that would take the fun out of a sequel. Aha but I'm definitely on planning writing a full story off of this sometime :)
Loved it. I'm off to check whether there's a sequel.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it. Aha not yet, but there will be one in the future :)
What really stands out in your story is Snape contemplating his own behavior toward Harry after seeing how his relatives and Umbridge had treated the boy, and Snape realizing he had been nearly as bad with his cutting remarks. Many stories have Snape dealing with other factors, but ignore his own behavior. Good focus!
Author's Response: Thank you! I noticed that in some other fanfictions I've read, so I sort of wanted to somehow include that in my fanfic :)
Yas I really enjoyed this fic. Thanks for writing it.
Author's Response: thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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