| Title: A Promise He Could Trust
| 20 Feb 2015 1:32 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Eso fue muy interesante, realmente interesante!!
Linda historia
Author's Response: gracias :)
Well done on submitting your first story for us to read. Its a big step! Your story covered all the salient points for Severus to discover the years of abuse Harry had suffered through. I liked how your Snape immediately took charge of Harry to ensure that he was placed under medical care. Nicely written story. Congrats.
Author's Response: Thanks! Aha yeah, I've been reading fanfiction for a while now, and I thought it might be fun to write a one-shot. I'm glad you liked it :)
| Title: A Promise He Could Trust
| 18 Feb 2015 7:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
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Well done, Nicole. It's quite a tear-jerker.
Author's Response: Wow thank you! That means a lot, knowing that my writing is that emotional; obviously it wasn't my goal to make it a tear-jerker lol but I'm really glad :)
| Title: A Promise He Could Trust
| 18 Feb 2015 2:17 am
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| Reviewer: Lili (Signed)
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I like it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
| Title: A Promise He Could Trust
| 18 Feb 2015 1:22 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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poor harry Very well done the dog electric collar I have never seen in a story for harry before was a good touch well done.
Author's Response: Yeah, I figured it would be a good additon to the story. and thank you :)
| Title: A Promise He Could Trust
| 17 Feb 2015 11:43 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Enjoyed reading this very much. It would be great if you continue with it.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! With all the feedback I've been getting, I think I'm definitely going to continue with this sometime :)
| Title: A Promise He Could Trust
| 17 Feb 2015 10:08 pm
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| Reviewer: A-zla (Anonymous)
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Very nice fic, and Snape is very much in character! I hope you'll write more.
Author's Response: thank you! aha that's what I was going for, so that's good to hear. I think I'm definitely going to, I'm just not sure when :)
| Title: A Promise He Could Trust
| 17 Feb 2015 9:49 pm
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| Reviewer: anna (Anonymous)
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Great!
Author's Response: thanks :)
| Title: A Promise He Could Trust
| 17 Feb 2015 1:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Dragon (Anonymous)
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Great story! I hope you decide to do a multi chapter.
Author's Response: thanks! I definitely want to come back to this story sometime in the future, hopefully soon :)
| Title: A Promise He Could Trust
| 17 Feb 2015 11:16 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Aw, in the end, he could trust Snape. You did a good job on this. Like to see more. Maybe another short story about what happens after this one ends.
Author's Response: thank you! and I'm considering doing that :)
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