It sounds like Bella may have covered all the bases. Looking forward to finding out what the plan is.
So Voldy is suspicious of the kids. I wonder if he is testing all of them or just the 'Snape' children? I believe you meant Wormtail, not Wormwood.
Harry pretending to be Snape's son - that must be his worst nightmare. I wonder what story they will have to explain why the children were never mentioned before?
So they want Harry and Hermione to play their children. Interesting. I wonder how long the potion lasts?
Sounds like they are at Spinners End. I'm curious to find out what Bella's feelings about Voldemort are in your story.
Yes, Harry definitely belongs in Gryffindor. He seems to leap before he looks. Now to find out what Snape has in store for them.
That was easy. If Harry fell for that so easily, maybe he wasn't meant to be a Slytherin after all.
A married Severus and Bellatrix. That's a switch. I wonder what they want two children for? Looking forward to finding out.
Title: Epilogue
| 20 Mar 2015 1:29 am
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Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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This story turned out to be quite a surprise. I can't even imagine being related to Bellatrix! (Or married to her, for that matter.) But you carried off the twist nicely, although I would have liked to see a few more chapters dealing with the family dynamics, as well as Voldemort's defeat. Hope you're over your writer's block!
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