I really enjoyed reading this. It was very nicely executed. Cool idea.
Its interesting, I snickered a little bit at the wormwood/wormtail Mishap. autocorrect is horrible
Quite a few surprises in the storyline. Hope its got you back in the writing mood.
Author's Response: Yes it did thanks. I know it was short chapters and not much substance, but it really helped. One day, I will make it better.
Oh, poor Snape!
Author's Response: Yeah, hee hee. He is in shock right now.
Lots of mini cliffies. I like.
Author's Response: Thank you. I like suspense. lol
Thank you, I liked the story. I think the short chapters were kind of neat and I appreciated the way you showed us the development, in action and in dialogue, instead of explaining things squarely. That kept the suspense up.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you. I am sorry that the chapters were so short, but did that on purpose to help me along, and not to get overwhelmed.
I enjoy the plot. It is all a little creepy. Nice touch to have Hermione nearly sorted into Slytherin - I gather that it is a hint of what is to come (I'm reading this for the second time)
Author's Response: Thanks. If ever I get the energy to work more on it, I will expand it and build on it, rather than lengthen the story itself, but there are some interesting possiblities.
Author's Response: Thanks. If ever I get the energy to work more on it, I will expand it and build on it, rather than lengthen the story itself, but there are some interesting possiblities.
Nice! I liked it! :D Thanks for trying out the challenge!
Author's Response: Thank you. I will one day expand on the story to meet the challenge better, but the challenge helped me to get past my writer's block, because it was so awesome.
Woah! Awesome! Haha serves you right, Snape!
Author's Response: Yeah, payback !lol
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