Hey there! This is an awesome story idea, I'm really, really looking forward to more, though the gaps in the chapter were definitely getting on my nerves, you might want to go back and edit it if you can, sometimes P&S can be a pain with uploading new chapters, :) Loved it! You are a wonderful writer! Very original idea, made me really happy to see Harry not treated as a saint, I think the responsibilities will do him a whole lot of good!
| Title: Dumbledore's Wrath
| 26 Mar 2015 10:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very unusual and very well written thank you
| Title: Dumbledore's Wrath
| 23 Mar 2015 2:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
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Absolutely riveting! Well written! I can't wait for more. (I guess that I'll have to wait.)
| Title: Dumbledore's Wrath
| 23 Mar 2015 12:55 am
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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Very interesting, eager to see where this is going!
| Title: Dumbledore's Wrath
| 22 Mar 2015 7:36 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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| Title: Dumbledore's Wrath
| 22 Mar 2015 4:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Yondi (Signed)
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Now that's interesting and new! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
That was an interesting first chapter. It does seem strange that Harry wasn't punished for cursing Malfoy and injuring him so severely. I liked the way the whole thing fell into place, too - the duel, Gryffindor going after Slytherin and the riot. It made sense. Having the castle itself angry with Harry was a nice touch. And I liked that Harry had to go to the Slytherin common room with Snape. I think he learned some things about Slytherin that he didn't know. Looking forward to more!
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