No gaps in this chapter, yay! It was so easy to read, and I loved it! Thank you!
| Title: The School Subdued
| 26 Mar 2015 10:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely lesson no wonder Dumbldore was in a pet!
I love the premise for this story and everything that is happening in it. There are parts that are confusing because every once in a while there will be a random sentence that has nothing to do with anything else that's being talked about. Occasionally there will also be a sentence missing a lot of words. I really like the story though and can't wait to read more. I'm waiting to find out why Dumbledore seemed so mad after listening in on Harry's class. I thought Harry did a great job teaching. Write more soon please :)
So after stoking the fires of hatred between Slytherin and the other 3 houses and convincing the Gryffindor house that they were always in the right for the past two decades, now Albus is upset that the students followed his lead into folly?
Of course, harry and draco were stupid as well as the others who 'rioted'.
I'm surprised, or maybe not, that Harry took the blame and punishment so meekly. I suppose he's used to not getting to defend himself. It would be interesting to have him demand to have one of the teachers see a pensieve memory of draco trying to crucio him.
Ah, well. Am enjoying the story. Update soon.
So how will Harry handle the Staff Room? Can't wait for more!
I enjoyed the scene with Harry teaching. He had some interesting techniques and I am sure the class was fun. I was glad you mentioned where Ron had disappeared off to. Yes, if he and Malfoy have to convalesce together, the hospital is going to be an unpleasant place.
| Title: The School Subdued
| 24 Mar 2015 8:10 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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looking forward to seeing how Harry deal with the teachers
| Title: The School Subdued
| 24 Mar 2015 4:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
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Love it! Thanks for the quick update.
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