Loved this last two chapters thanks for letting Hermione talk to Harry he really needs it. Poor Severus lol
Hmmmm... I wonder what they'll think when they find out exactly what happened down there.
| Title: Into the Chamber
| 12 Jul 2015 10:44 pm
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| Reviewer: SHallow (Anonymous)
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I continue to be amazed by your efficiency at writing fanfiction - such fanfiction that is causing me to reevaluate my predesposition on most other poorly written fanfics. Way to go! How did ur med exams go anyway Rachel? Next chapter soon? Will Malfoh join Harry? Will Harry's punishment end by the end of the year, or will it last through the hols and the next year too? Guess you will be leavinv that for me to find out myself... Teehee
| Title: Any Bets?
| 04 Jul 2015 9:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Excellent chapter I wonder if you see Dumbledore's disappointment as a result of his handling of Harry in the past?
As always awesome! Even though I just read a few of the coming chapters on fanfiction... Looking forward to the upcoming chapters
Author's Response: Haha, thanks. I've been going through to try and get everything to make more sense and when I'm happy, uploading them here. I'm almost caught up. I'll have a new chapter out within a couple of days though!
| Title: A Defensive Position
| 08 Jun 2015 9:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very clever thank you so much
I understand the punishment but there is also the split from anything good. You allowed a child to be shunned made fun of by his peers and his so called friends won't talk to him. If his home life was better he would just leave. I understand punishment should fit the crime but be careful not to go overboard. Then it just is abuse which could push someone towards the dark quicker,they start to think dark depression are you going to allow draco to torment him like he does in the books so not only is harry shunned he is tormented by hid peer who was just as guilty but did not get caught.
| Title: A Defensive Position
| 02 Jun 2015 1:36 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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Great explanation of Dumbledore's action. Enjoyed the interplay between Severus and Harry.
I love this story!!! It is so awesome... Waiting for the next chapter. You are magniloquent, I swear.
I have really enjoyed this story. I feel like Harry's punishment didn't fit the crime,he should been punished yes. But he has lost everything Draco has done things just as bad and got away with it Hermione teeth and dementors quiddich game. Dumbledore better watch it they need Harry more than he needs them. He could go to gringotts clean out his vault and walk away. You keep kicking someone while their down they might not get back then where will you bee. Someone was surprised that he took his punishment so well he wad that way when it was just. Remember the abuse from home whether he is different at school can still bring up home and possibly break him not make him stronger...
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