I love your vivid descriptions of camp life and all the fun it has to offer in the outdoors. I like Rhys as a character, and think that your line about Harry not used to seeing Muggles so happy was hilarious. Great chapter end as well — of course, Severus, with his keen observational skills, would see Harry at camp despite Harry’s best efforts.
For one terrifying moment, I thought that Snape would be Harry's counselor, but I am glad that he isn't. It was too dark, cheesy, are we? Light enough to see that it was Harry but dark enough not to see the bruises, i wonder how long would it take to Snape stop being blind as you said in the summary.
Thank you! Great to have Severus in the camp! Hmm hmm, can I just ask about your other camp story? I love that one so much!
I still say that Rhys was a labrador retriever in a previous life
So Snape did see Harry. He must not have noticed Harry's injuries since it was dark. The camp sounds like a lot of fun. I can see why Harry would want to stay for a while.
I'm so happy I found this story for many reasons. The foremost one being that it's taking me back to when i was at Camp for the summer and how much fun I had. Thank you so much for that since I had essentially forgotten those experiences.
Harry's reasoning and circumspection is spot on for his age and background. He's also - as most abused kids are - entirely correct in his reasoning's and assumptions of the adults and politics around him.
I can't wait to read more!
| Title: Camp
| 08 Apr 2015 10:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Wolverineeee (Anonymous)
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Another great story! I can't wait to read the next chapter. I have a strong feeling that Snape is going to be Harry's new counselor.
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