I love that they went on that hike together, and especially enjoyed their time at the creek. Absolutely lovely.
so, I guess you gave up on the idea of Snape being mean? Because that's good, I don't like a mean Snape after he has developed an understanding.
| Title: Not Rhys
| 11 Apr 2015 9:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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Thanks for another update, that's great.
but - gillyweed.. blee.. :(
But still, I'm very happy, that Severus has thought about something to help with Harry's fear.
I hope, that he will see Harry's scars and bruises and hopefully heal him a little..
ohhh I love how you wrote in Gillyweed! Fantastic! Glad to see Harry and Snape enjoy spending time together!
excellent chapter can't wait for the next
| Title: Not Rhys
| 11 Apr 2015 8:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I'm sure someone has mentioned it but we don't have salamanders, craw dads (what are they!) or garte snakes in Britain. Also they are very lucky with the weather, it usually rains especially in August!
Author's Response: Hi Fmh, according to online there are different types of garter snakes in Britain. These are they typical little non-poisonus snakes in gardens and on trails. Crawdads, also known as crawfish are also in England and have actually become a problem for the country. Also a search of online says there are three different types of newts in Britain, which are salamanders. It's not August yet in the story. It is still earlier in the summer. School has been out for one week when Harry gets taken from the Dursleys, then he spends one week with Rhys, and so far only a week and a half with Snape. The camp doesn't go for the entire summer, so when camp gets out there will still be almost a month of summer left for Harry. Thanks for the review.
| Title: Not Rhys
| 11 Apr 2015 8:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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yay finally;) I am glad they are more comfortable with eachother. Looking forward to the pool scene and much more:)
| Title: Not Rhys
| 11 Apr 2015 8:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely chapter I like the introduction of gillyweed into the story
Great chapter! I felt as if I were on the hike with Snape and Harry, and then the crawdads -- what a catch! I'm hoping Harry will do well on his swimming test, but I do have to wonder, if the prize isn't a bicycle after all, will he be terribly disappointed? (Snape did say that the prize was different every year, but Harry is fixated on that bike...)
| Title: Not Rhys
| 11 Apr 2015 6:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Nesmay (Anonymous)
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Thank you so much for updating! Now I can't wait to see what happens during Harry's swimming test!
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