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Title: What Severus Snape Saw 08 May 2022 1:43 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter has some of the greatest, most brilliantly crafted lines, i.e., reasons, counting, being uncountable — all absolute perfection.
Title: What Severus Snape Saw 20 Mar 2021 8:43 pm
Reviewer: MellarkandArt (Signed) [Report This]
    “Harry lowered the towel as Snape let go of his wrist. There were 24 reasons to hide. Good ones. Long reasons and short reasons, jagged reasons and curved reasons. Reasons that had been slashed, hit, burned, and beaten into him. Reasons his uncle wanted him to remember. Reasons that Harry was certain he'd never forget.”

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Title: What Severus Snape Saw 04 Dec 2017 7:49 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved how you said the scars as reasons, 24 scars and 24 reasons. A very beautiful description, I love a 'realisation hit' Snape, and this gave me exactly that! Keep going!
Title: What Severus Snape Saw 15 Apr 2015 1:05 am
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story! The camp reminds me a lot of the one in the movie "Camp." I can wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response:

    Lol, that's where I got the idea for a camp where a counselor goes with every camper.  I just tried to make it my own as much as possible.

Title: What Severus Snape Saw 13 Apr 2015 9:47 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I am sorry you took my comments as criticism it was not intended as such, I have never heard grass snakes, newts and crayfish called that!
    Very good chapter thank you

    Author's Response: Lol it's ok, I didn't take it as criticism, I just didn't want anybody to think I was making things up lol.
Title: What Severus Snape Saw 12 Apr 2015 3:35 pm
Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's so great, that Severus eventyaully has seen
    Harry, as he is. I nhope, that you have something in store for them, also after the camp...
    I would like it eventual guardian-story vrry much.
    I will be waiting for the rest of the chapters.
Title: What Severus Snape Saw 12 Apr 2015 2:22 pm
Reviewer: A-zla (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Two great chapters, again! I loved the gillyweed scene. I'm looking forward to reading more!
Title: What Severus Snape Saw 12 Apr 2015 12:37 pm
Reviewer: Nesmay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you, thank you, thank you! God I love this story but suppose I'll have to be patient to see what happens next. Well done writing this!
Title: What Severus Snape Saw 12 Apr 2015 12:35 pm
Reviewer: Demi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant story! I love your style of writing, the slow building relationship is very realistic. The wait for the next chapter will be well worth it :)
Title: What Severus Snape Saw 12 Apr 2015 8:40 am
Reviewer: alexander (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very very well written! This is... Wow!

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