I like the story very much, even it was a bit short, I wanted to be a very long story. I didn't want to be finished.
I like your writings, the flow of the stories, the characters, the realistic behavior.
Thank you very much.
I just about sobbed all through those last few chapters. Well done.
Really liked the bit about meeting Harry and getting away from that Potter boy he didn't like. :)
the end was.......... fast.
I am glad I read this fic. Lovely, I like how fast you went in the end, and how Harry later became his fully adopted son. Lovely Lovely Lovely!!
And even though i want a sequel, i won't pressure you, or even ask for one, still, it was ONE OF THE best fics I have ever read! Loved it!!
I really enjoyed reading this summer tale, and love the happy ending. Thank you for sharing it.
| Title: The Reality We All Face
| 12 Jul 2017 6:08 am
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| Reviewer: elwarre (Signed)
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Lovely story. I really enjoyed watching the relationship develop between Harry and Snape. Thanks for sharing!
That was great! I always like the stories where Severus sees through his hate and sees Harry.
I loved the variety in your story. I have never read another story like this. Thank you!
| Title: The Reality We All Face
| 23 Mar 2016 7:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Jadeile (Anonymous)
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This was excellent, thank you very much for writing it! Keep up the good work.
The ending is missing whether or not Harry ever saw Rhys again, though. (I choose to believe that he did and the guy became his honorary uncle, and later all three of them worked in the camp together and were totally awesome.)
One thing that actually bothers me: Lily didn't really do much for the plot, despite the expectation that her introduction and especially her name gave. Her sharing a name with Lily Potter felt pointless, especially since Snape didn't even react to it in any way like one would expect, at the very least. If she was named almost anything else she wouldn't have felt as important and thus the lack of something happening wouldn't have been quite as disappointing. But oh well, otherwise the fic worked.
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