I love the concept that people only see what they expect to see.
| Title: Mirage
| 21 Apr 2015 8:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very clever and well written thank you
Please continue. I wish the chapters were longer.
Author's Response: I already have most of the next chapter written, but I'm not sure how long it will take me to finish it. I would like to be able to write longer chapters, but unfortunately my brain only seems to be able to cope with one scene/idea at a time. The next ones are a bit longer as things start coming to a head.
Great start! Painful to read though how Snape and other adults have such an ingrained picture of what the BWL should be that they utterly fail in their duties. Though I love Snape, I sincerely hope he feels deep shame at his actions, along with guilt and remorse. I also hope Harry doesn't let him off the hook too quickly. Make him earn Harry's trust after 4 years of abusing him.
Author's Response: Hi teriwright, I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far. Don't worry, it happens slowly, but from now on Snape starts getting better. I've just put up the next chapter, give it a try.
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