I love that Snape is starting to see past his own perceptions.
| Title: Hallucination
| 21 Apr 2015 8:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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What a cliffie! Thank you an excellent chapter
The first chapter was very short, so not unpleasant but not brilliant either. This chapetr seems to have covered the whole scenario much better, and the glamours are a good way to show it all. Will be watching out for the next update.
Author's Response: I tried making the first chapter longer but it just didn't work. This third chapter is actually the first one I planned and wrote, and is the best at setting it out. Throughout the chapters, make sure you note when it is that people can/can't see through the glamours. It gives a clue as to how they work, and I'm not sure how much I'll spell it out in-story.
I love strictly canon Snape haha... hoping he stops ignoring the signs and actually takes some initiative with this. Typical Sev. Update soon!
Author's Response: He's still struggling with the idea, but is actually starting to take action. As you'll see next chapter, that is the meaning behind his the final instructions he gives Harry for Madam Pomfrey. I'll update the next chapter as soon as I can.
| Title: Hallucination
| 18 Apr 2015 5:04 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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short chapter but good. I look forward to the next one
Author's Response: I'm afraid my writing style lends itself to shorter chapters, but I hope the quality makes up for the lack of quantity.
There is no way Harry is going to Poppy. Severus just needs to take Harry to the Hospital Wing himself
Author's Response: Remember, at this point Harry isn't suspicious of Snape's motives. He thinks that everyone can see his bruises and just doesn't say/do anything, and he himself doesn't bring it up. He is quite happy to go to the hospital wing to get his potion burn seen to.
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