Hey there! I really enjoyed reading about Harry in this chapter, he's matured so much and it is really noticeable! I enjoyed his conversation with Kingsley, he's taking a stand and doing what he believes is right. This chapter makes me want to read more!
At the beginning of Snape's letter it says if you are reading this I must be must be death instead of saying dead. I'm really enjoying your writing style, it is better quality than what I've grown to expect from most fanfiction. I'm looking forward to reading about Malfoy's trial that should be really, really interesting!
Author's Response: Hi there, again. :P
The whole mature Harry is a bit of a flickering thing.. it's not there all the time. Though, he's getting much better when it comes to standing up for himself. Which is why he seems more mature. If I'm doing things right, you'll see that side of him more and more the longer the story goes on. I fixed Snape's letter, thanks for that one! :D
As for my writing style; why thank you, that's always nice to hear.
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