Great fic, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: ThnQ :D
wonderful story!
Author's Response: ThnQ :D
Hi, I've just discovered your story and liking it so far... The only thing I find a bit distracting is the amount of grammatical mistakes. If you don't have anybody available to review for you I would be happy to help. I hope you don't mind me saying that. Anyway, I will be waiting for you next instalment. Reyes.
Author's Response: Yes please. I need help with my English. It's perfectly fine for conversations but it's severely lacking when it comes to writing a novel.. So yes, help is always appreciated.
Awesome chapter, I hope you update soon! Thank you for the length of each chapter it's nice to have more than 1000 words every time, :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews :)
I'm working on the sentences, it's not always easy when writing. I tend to mix up the punctuation rules for English and my native language.
I totally missed the death thing, but I have more of those mistakes. Someone pointed out that I have Ones instead of Once and Than instead of Then, it's easy to miss when you've written and read a chapter not that long ago. I'll go over each chapter again in a few weeks. So thanks for pointing that one out, won't overlook it again :).
And thank you for the comment about writing style and staying in character.. It's nice to hear, especially since most of the first few chapters were first drafts.. It's good to know I can do them right in one go, I'm having trouble with that in my original story.
Sorry about the Cliffhanger, I won't do it to often.. I uploaded this on fanfiction as well and I wanted followers :P
And last, I'm trying to keep my chapters between 6000 and 8000 words. I despise it when someone updates a chapter and I'm all happy and 2 minutes later I have to wait again..
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