Title: In The Shadows
| 03 Jul 2015 6:05 pm
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Reviewer: QI (Anonymous)
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Absolutely beautiful! Not at all OOC imo, and could not stop reading until the end. I love the character portrayal and may use his guided meditation for my own use! :) thank you for a wonderful story!
Title: In The Shadows
| 02 Jul 2015 11:21 pm
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Reviewer: etherian (Anonymous)
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Definitely not OOC. This was fantastic and I am going to share it with a group of people who will really understand this. Thank you!
Author's Response: Hi there, just curious, what group is that?
oh wow! that was AMAZING! I just love how you've written it, so poignant. I don't think it was ooc at all. Both snape and harry were very much in character. Although, i have to say, i never thought snape would use the world 'pink' to describe the clouds and sky.
This is really good. I also love the nicknames, The Strong, Brave and Lucky ones.
Author's Response: Well if he's a man of truth, and the clouds were pink he couldn't say they were another color could he? :p
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