Poor Hedwig. She must be frustrated. Dobby really needs to be found out. Im surprised that Poppy didn’t see any physical damage to Harry, past or present, from his recent run in or from the Dursleys. Maybe the Dursleys never really hurt him?
I'm very disappointed in this chapter: Just because Rowling is too stupid and callous to realize that CHILD ABUSE leaves scars, etc., I would have thought that Poppy would, at least, have noted Harry's most recent injuries from his run-in with the local hoodlums! I find it a cause for concern when some fan fic authors are as cavalier and dismissive of child abuse as the 'original' so-called 'Children's Fiction' author! I don't believe that it bodes well for our society or its children in the long run!
MelJ
Great story. Can't SS use mind arts to find to about HP childhood? And expose it all to AD!!!
I love this. It is wonderful. It has been riotously amusing so far. I am so looking forward to your future updates(?) Have a happy New Year!
Oh, heck. I was hoping that Dobby had ended the spell since the mail had been delivered but he must be too determined. Poor Hedwig must be very frustrated.
| Title: Chapter 14
| 06 Dec 2015 12:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the chapter especially Albus/Severus conversation, thank you for updating
Great chapter! I'd love to see what Mione wrote!
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