I'm very disappointed in this chapter: Just because Rowling is too stupid and callous to realize that CHILD ABUSE leaves scars, etc., I would have thought that Poppy would, at least, have noted Harry's most recent injuries from his run-in with the local hoodlums! I find it a cause for concern when some fan fic authors are as cavalier and dismissive of child abuse as the 'original' so-called 'Children's Fiction' author! I don't believe that it bodes well for our society or its children in the long run!
MelJ
| Title: Chapter 15
| 19 Feb 2016 3:25 pm
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| Reviewer: PharaohsLoyalMagician (Anonymous)
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This is a brilliant story so far! I especially love how Severus bought the figurines and is allowing Harry to help and will make inquires as to the ones belonging to Lily. I also love how everything is flowing and that Hedwig is determined to get to her boy and that all his friends are worried and that Harry wants to talk more to Nevile and that Dumbledore didnt want to hire Lockheart and is letting Severus know a year in advance about hiring Remus and...I just really am enjoying this story. You're a brilliant author and writer. Cheers and ta. I wish I could rate this a 20. I hope there's another chapter soon.
| Title: Chapter 15
| 14 Jan 2016 10:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely update
LOL, Poor harry. I think I'd be close to eruption with the amount of frustration he's experiencing.
| Title: Chapter 15
| 11 Jan 2016 12:52 pm
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| Reviewer: AYusufali (Anonymous)
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The charms actually arent quite the same, so your assigent is absolutely correct! Hover charms alow the user to move the objects left and right as well while levitation charms do not.
I loved your description of Snape's spell. I'm curious if he said anything other than cussing up a storm?
Great story. Can't SS use mind arts to find to about HP childhood? And expose it all to AD!!!
I love this. It is wonderful. It has been riotously amusing so far. I am so looking forward to your future updates(?) Have a happy New Year!
Oh, heck. I was hoping that Dobby had ended the spell since the mail had been delivered but he must be too determined. Poor Hedwig must be very frustrated.
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