Title: Wish Granted
| 07 Aug 2015 10:03 pm
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Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Very cute from start to finish! 😊
Author's Response: Thank you!
A very interesting story. A bit of a different plotline. I've seem 'wish' stories before, but this was shorter and resolved quicker, which is nice sometimes. the interaction between the three men was fun as well.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and for sharing your thoughts with me. I'm glad that you liked the interaction between the three men. I did not want to write a very long story; I've got several unfinished stories, and didn't want this to become one of those.
Just a lovely story! I enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed this.
Well done, though I think that the star should get more than just a plushie life (though I do love my plushies). Hum, now, I'm going to do something I never do and give you full points. Perhaps you can do more in this vein. Kudos and keep it up.
Author's Response: Maybe I should have gone with my first impulse, and let the star sticker become a newborn star -- I had it written out like that and everything, and then thought she might want to stay with Harry...perhaps the wrong choice. She could have lived a lovely life as a twinkling star (though, technically they are not 'living' when they are stars). Thank you so very much! :D
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