Is there any chance you will continue this story? It’s really balanced and character truly feel true to the canon
Fantastic story! I love seeing Harry gain new, useful knowledge from Snape. Please continue your story one day!
I'm not going to 'discount' my rating for all of the various typos, 'spypos', and grammar errors because the story itself is so well thought out and entertaining that one can either ignore or forgive them, easily.
I hope that you're planning to, eventually, return to this great story.
Thank you for sharing!
MelJ
I fear I am beginning to sound redundant by this juncture, but the more I read of Harry and Snape's growing relationship, the more I enjoy it. It really does make for not only and interesting, but an enjoyable read. It was sad to see that Sirius was being his stubborn self, although, it felt true to nature.
In any case, I do look forward to seeing what's next, and hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Aah, only a little.. But it's still nice to hear :D
Sirius might turn around, though I don't think I'll write it in this one; maybe in the sequel (If I ever get to writing it)
Next chapter is halfway done, but I'm a bit stuck.. Hopefully I'll be able to get to it soon :)
I would love to be able to exercise regularly but we are still fixing up our new house. I work anywhere from 1-5 days a week and when I'm not at work I'm usually cleaning house or outside pulling weeds.
Author's Response: aah well, can't have everything we want.
Just stumbled across this and I love your premise of following the summers. I think your snape is believable and am loving his slow turnaround to seeing harry for what he is not who he believed.Sirius was predictable hot headed and immersed in the past, I'm glad snape made harry talk about it. Looking foward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you. Premise was a challenge but still... It's always nice to hear my characters are believable :)
I keep telling myself I heed to exercise more but I never have the time to do it all of the time.
Author's Response: Everybody says that, it's rarely true. Nothing to be ashamed of though, exercising regularly is annoying :P
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| 29 Aug 2015 8:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very interesting the view point you give of Sirius and Severus. Whereas Sirius is happy looking back at the past Severus deals with the future for Harry. Thank you a great chapter but I prefer Harry with his glasses!
Author's Response: Sirius isn't happy looking back.. It's simply that it's the only thing he has left that can still make him smile. He needs more time to heal before he can start looking forward again.
Snape one the other hand, refuses to look back. There are to many mistakes and to much hardship for him to look back. So, he focuses on the future. A future which is doesn't expect to stay in for long.
As someone who has been wearing glasses for as long as she can remember, I have to tell you that it really doesn't matter what you prefer. Sorry, that might sound harsh but fact is, nobody who needs to wear glasses all the time would choose to do so. It doesn't matter whether they are in at the moment or whether others like you better with glasses, all that matters is that you have no choice. Harry lives in a magical world where they can regrow bones in a single night, and manufacture magical eyes that can see through the back of your own head.. There is no reason for him to be forced to wear those infernal glasses.
That said, I do think I understand what you mean though. The glasses are a part of Harry, it would be weird for him not to need them any longer.
Anyway, Thanks for the review :D I'm glad you liked it.
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