There’s so much to love in this chapter - the results of the prank, Harry helping the younger student, and the general witty style in which you write. All thoroughly enjoyable.
harry learning interesting things by being in prof. snape's company!!
Another great chapter. Glad to see Harry helping out a kid and pinpointing why he might be struggling a bit. Bravo.
| Title: Bad Lessons
| 11 Aug 2015 4:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved it! Thank you so much
This is so good! I'm really enjoying it, can't wait for the next one :)
| Title: Bad Lessons
| 08 Aug 2015 2:49 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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Enjoyed the interaction in class.
I enjoyed the scene with Harry helping the Slytherin boy with his potion. It sounds like Harry has picked up more in his potions classes than Snape may have thought. Severus was quite upset about Moody using the imperious curse. I wonder what Albus will say about it?
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Yes, Harry's definitely a bit better at potions than Snape thought he was. He got a bit of a surprise. More to come about that imperius
I wonder if Harry will ever stop being shocked that his perception isn't always right.
Author's Response: Probably not, he's a bit dense
despite the obvious miscommunication bit between harry and severus, the interaction between the both of them are very realistic! i love it! esp Harry in the story, his teenage voice is very real. great job!
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