It’s realistic and heartening that the professors are noticing that Moody is a bit off. I hope they keep putting the pieces together.
I like that Harry stood up for them. Good on him. Though I hope Snape realizes his error soon.
I was wondering when Snape was going to address Harry’s public cheekiness. The essay topic is hilarious.
There’s so much to love in this chapter - the results of the prank, Harry helping the younger student, and the general witty style in which you write. All thoroughly enjoyable.
I read your most recent one-shot, and enjoyed it so much that I had to read more of your stories. This first chapter is so fun!
I am so glad you are starting on this again! Snape is getting hints of the real Harry but he needs more time with him. His grounding is almost up so not sure how that will happen, but I have hope! Also hoping this means regular updates are going to start again. I re-read from the beginning so I wouldn't be lost and its just as good as I remember.
| Title: And Breathe
| 22 Dec 2020 8:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for updating your brilliant story. The changes that Barth made was bewildering but so clever.
this is really good! im a bit lost at the moment honestly (its late and I'm very tired) but I love this story. the characters seem really in character and I love the depth of the plot. i hadn't realized this was more than one chapter when I started reading it but every chapter has been so good so its worth it.
I wonder what will happen to Fowley.
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