I enjoyed the scene with Harry helping the Slytherin boy with his potion. It sounds like Harry has picked up more in his potions classes than Snape may have thought. Severus was quite upset about Moody using the imperious curse. I wonder what Albus will say about it?
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Yes, Harry's definitely a bit better at potions than Snape thought he was. He got a bit of a surprise. More to come about that imperius
I wonder if Harry will ever stop being shocked that his perception isn't always right.
Author's Response: Probably not, he's a bit dense
despite the obvious miscommunication bit between harry and severus, the interaction between the both of them are very realistic! i love it! esp Harry in the story, his teenage voice is very real. great job!
This is really cool. Can't wait for more. :D
Haha I loved this chapter, what a hilarious idea for a story! Really good start, I look forward to reading more!
This was just wonderful! Grounding Harry in the dungeons... he is going to figuratively dieeee
this is interesting! cant wait to find out what you have in store for poor harry! hahaha thank you for sharing this with us! :D
Compared to living with the Dursleys while this is uncomfortable count he just has to count each day and get through it.
I love it. Fantastic start! :D Tehehehe!
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