Loved the random fish! Haha!
I'm interested. Harry seems to be incapable of doing the household charms right, isn't he?
lol Just a typical morning in a magical school. Snape didn't even seem too surprised at the hair spells though the fish seems to have briefly startled him.
| Title: Slytherin Bullies
| 19 Sep 2015 11:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Stephand (Anonymous)
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I stopped mid chapter to let you know I appreciate your use of the gender neutral pronouns. My oldest child prefers those but it's a very difficult task to speak as in plural for a singular person. Your story gave me hope that someday it will come easier
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I felt it was an important thing to try, I haven't yet come across a fic which has a non-binary character or addressed similar issues. It was quite difficult to do, and I'm almost certain I slipped up in a couple of places. My best wishes to your eldest :)
Looking forward to reading more! :D
I love the relationship that has grown between Snape and Harry, even though they don't realise it themselves yet. I think that Snape would make a good mentor, possibly guardian, depending on where you are going with the story.
Great job. Love this story.
Can wait to see what more happens with Fowley and with Moody.
| Title: Confrontation
| 16 Sep 2015 9:44 am
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| Reviewer: Kay (Anonymous)
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Great story- and I love Fowley's character, it's just dawned on me that it's the first time that I come across a non-binary character in fanfiction.
Polly juice ! Lol harry remebers deep down really lol more p,ease when you can.
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