Can't wait for the next installment! Things are going a little too well, though. I have a feeling things will get complicated soon...
(Smiling happily) I understand how Harry feels because I'm also quite afraid of large bodies of water. Maybe not to the extent that Harry is, though.
With Harry, it seems that if something can go wrong, it will. I hope this incident doesn't change Snape's treatment of Harry for the worse. D:
Well this certainly took a turn! Sneaky, snakey Snape.
Also, this is the first time I've ever heard of putting tuna on a baked potato...
And there's Snape ruining everything! Grrr.
My first impression was "I cant believe I didnt think of using 'love thy neighbor' for my own fic!" It's a good thing I didn't, though. It would be like going to a party and finding someone wearing the same dress. :P
Props to Harry for being proactive and getting to the neighbors before the Dursleys! I wonder how Mr. Number 10 will react...
Is Harry going to be sick? I hope so.
This fear of the ocean thing is new and mysterious, but the most interesting part was the possibility for conflict here.
| Title: Exposed
| 26 Aug 2015 3:26 am
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| Reviewer: NuthatchXi (Anonymous)
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I really like the promise of tension in this chapter! Food poisoning? Along with an already on edge Petunia? Oh, boy. Excellent!
*groans* Harry what if you get food poisoning?
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