| Title: Breaking the Silence
| 20 Aug 2015 10:20 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Well done. I hope you continue with this. Maybe write about what caused Harry's problems. Did they occur because of the attempt by Voldemort on his life? Was it caused by abuse by his family? Was he born this way? What exactly are his problems and can he be helped with them? You left us with a lot of unanswered questions.
| Title: Breaking the Silence
| 20 Aug 2015 11:05 am
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| Reviewer: crotia (Anonymous)
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ahw, such a cute little one shot
In glass make is willing to help Harry out.
Very nice one-shot (with room for more, if it tickles the muse's fancy). I really enjoyed reading this, and like how you had Severus work with Harry.
Ah, poor Harry! It's good to see Snape resolving to help the boy. I would like to see some more, sometime, and see their relationship grow through the course of Snape teaching Harry how to work through his limitations and Harry learning to trust.
In any case, it was a rather great read! Thanks for responding to my challenge. ^^
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