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Reviews For Surgery
Title: Chapter 4 Surgery 17 Apr 2016 8:23 pm
Reviewer: lilyqueen777 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that Severus claimed to be Harry's father, and that Harry had a successful surgery. I was worried about Harry's health, especially since he was dehydrated and Aunt Petunia left him in the hospital without getting Harry help.
Title: Chapter 4 Surgery 31 Aug 2015 8:18 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good Severus not too mushy at the moment!
Title: Chapter 4 Surgery 27 Aug 2015 3:36 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm surprised that Snape is so squeamish. As a potions master, he had to prepare all kinds of disgusting things so I would think the surgery and what it involves would not affect him so much.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the reviews! If you read the next chapter, Snape’s ”squeamishness” will be at least partly addressed. Yes, he handles potions ingredients, but we do not know if he particularly enjoys it, do we? And in my experience there is a huge difference between cutting the entrails of a dead animal, and cutting in a live human being… People are different in that aspect - some absolutely shun the idea and become nauseous, others find it fascinating, and in my experience the squeamish ones are not always the ones you would guess from the start…

Title: Chapter 4 Surgery 24 Aug 2015 2:03 pm
Reviewer: Hesperis (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, super chapter. Snape must have been totally freaked out.
    I like the way how you write the medical stuff. I'm looking forward the next chapter. :)
    P.S.: Thank you for the change of the lettering ;)
Title: Chapter 4 Surgery 24 Aug 2015 10:22 am
Reviewer: jadzia66 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am so loving this story!! Can't wait to see what happens next... you have me on the edge of my seat!
Title: Chapter 4 Surgery 24 Aug 2015 2:25 am
Reviewer: Jeanette (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am enjoying this story. BTW 3 years ago I had my own experience with appendicitis. It really did feel the way you described. except no evil Aunt tried to kill me lol
Title: Chapter 4 Surgery 24 Aug 2015 2:19 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great build-up.
Title: Chapter 4 Surgery 23 Aug 2015 10:32 pm
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    I sort of think Harry losing his magic was Petunia's goal all along. If he died, then no matter in her eyes. Gah, if she "wins" I think I'll cry.

    Not to laugh, but Snape being out of sorts and ignorant would be funny if it wasn't such a dire circumstance.

    I sincerely hope Petunia is punished, legally and harshly for her treatment of Harry. Attempted murder charges could be argued by a half-way decent lawyer I would think. The dehydration alone would support that, let alone refusing medical care. But then again, the entire family participated in depriving Harry of water and medical care. A bit complex isn't it? I can't see the Dursley family remaining free after this in RL.

    I look forward to more! Can't wait to see what happens.
Title: Chapter 4 Surgery 23 Aug 2015 8:25 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Will Harry be okay? Or did the surgery come to late?

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