Curious and curiouser, I wonder what the next chapter will be!
Author's Response: Here it is... and more to come...
| Title: Chapter 5 The Patient
| 24 Aug 2015 8:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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Thank you for your wonderful, imaginitive story! I fear that Severus' trust in the headmaster is misplaced ...
Author's Response: The issue with Dumbledore's resposibility for Harry's family life is indeed complicated. I'm not sure I will resolve it completely in this story. See if you like the outcome of the next chapter...
| Title: Chapter 4 Surgery
| 24 Aug 2015 2:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Hesperis (Anonymous)
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Wow, super chapter. Snape must have been totally freaked out.
I like the way how you write the medical stuff. I'm looking forward the next chapter. :)
P.S.: Thank you for the change of the lettering ;)
| Title: Chapter 4 Surgery
| 24 Aug 2015 10:22 am
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| Reviewer: jadzia66 (Anonymous)
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I am so loving this story!! Can't wait to see what happens next... you have me on the edge of my seat!
| Title: Chapter 4 Surgery
| 24 Aug 2015 2:25 am
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| Reviewer: Jeanette (Anonymous)
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I am enjoying this story. BTW 3 years ago I had my own experience with appendicitis. It really did feel the way you described. except no evil Aunt tried to kill me lol
| Title: Chapter 4 Surgery
| 24 Aug 2015 2:19 am
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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I sort of think Harry losing his magic was Petunia's goal all along. If he died, then no matter in her eyes. Gah, if she "wins" I think I'll cry.
Not to laugh, but Snape being out of sorts and ignorant would be funny if it wasn't such a dire circumstance.
I sincerely hope Petunia is punished, legally and harshly for her treatment of Harry. Attempted murder charges could be argued by a half-way decent lawyer I would think. The dehydration alone would support that, let alone refusing medical care. But then again, the entire family participated in depriving Harry of water and medical care. A bit complex isn't it? I can't see the Dursley family remaining free after this in RL.
I look forward to more! Can't wait to see what happens.
Will Harry be okay? Or did the surgery come to late?
| Title: Chapter 3 Thirst
| 23 Aug 2015 11:14 am
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| Reviewer: Hesperis (Anonymous)
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Hello,
you have a interesting story there. I'm looking forward the next chapters! :)
I have one plea though - could you, please write with serif face? It's easier for reading a long texts. Thank you. :)
Author's Response: Changed it just for you :-) Now that you mentioned it, I think that I have heard that serif face is easier to read, so I'm glad that you pointed it out. When I write I prefer another lay-out. Hope that you continue enjoying the story.
Oh no! Poor Harry! I hope Snape comes to the rescue soon!
Author's Response: Knight in black is on his way. Please read chapter 4!
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