| Title: Let's Try Something New
| 09 Dec 2019 5:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I loved this story thank you. It would be great if you could continue it, part of me wants him to go to Durmstrang.
I hope you can help him Snape.
| Title: Let's Try Something New
| 27 Dec 2015 3:18 am
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| Reviewer: Bobby (Anonymous)
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Nice fanfic.... Pls continue writing
| Title: Let's Try Something New
| 26 Nov 2015 1:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Severituslover (Anonymous)
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It's awesome! Please contine!
Cool. I hadn't realized I'd inspired someone to write!
Author's Response: Yes, thank you for all that you write! I love your stories and they always give me great ideas.
I like the idea of the story, and am sorry you decided not to continue it, but I just can't swallow Harry's reaction to Snape at the end. IMHO, harry's reaction would have been resignation and fear to be imprisoned with Snape - his cruel abuser - for an entire semester. That's just asking harry to kill himself at first opportunity. There wouldn't be hope. Way too much grooming for Harry to just believe "oops, Sorry Harry. I actually do love you and I'll never hurt you again".
I suppose, if you wanted these two to form a relationship, I would have had Severus sign the permission slip with the condition that Harry spend the summer with him.... with a therapist in residence. Harry needs time and space away from Snape and the Hell he's lived. He needs to get some confidence back as well as some good old fashioned anger for how he was treated.
I honestly couldn't read JA's story past the first few chapters. It was too cruel to stomach. In RL, there would be no reconciliation.
| Title: Let's Try Something New
| 23 Nov 2015 8:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A good ending but I would have liked to see him go to the other school!
| Title: A Cold Revelation
| 23 Nov 2015 8:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very sad I hope you let him go to Durmstrang
| Title: A Last Broken Hope
| 23 Nov 2015 7:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you very interesting
| Title: A Last Broken Hope
| 23 Nov 2015 12:21 pm
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| Reviewer: waha (Anonymous)
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I like your story but it's quite confusing because I read the original story long time ago. In which year is Harry ?
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