Good Job! Very nice (even though it was a tad dark ;)
Beautiful ending. I really like the gifts that Severus gave to Harry, and how Lily came to him at the stroke of midnight, just as Harry had passed out looking at the angel. Lovely Christmas story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! =)
Yessss
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I liked this story a lot. You did a great job in building a sense of urgency in Harry's condition and Severus' concern about him. The snow storm added a nice touch, too. The way you described the various scenes made me feel like I was there watching. And ending with the miracle comment was a perfect finishing touch. I'm glad you were able to finish and submit it in time.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you liked it! I'm glad I managed to get it on time too! lol.
This was a darkish story, but I loved the guardian angel(s), and also how Snape's comment about the Easter Bunny seemed to foreshadow Bugs! So glad Harry got a good Christmas, and pleased that Severus was willing to go to so much trouble to that end. Thanks for a great read, and Merry Christmas! 🎅
Author's Response: I didn't intend for it to be so dark, but it just sort of happened that way. Thank you for enjoying my story, and Merry Christmas to you too!
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| 22 Dec 2015 9:19 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Well done. I love how it all came about, Harry's wish, Lily appearing to Severus and how finally Harry was saved.
Author's Response: Thank you! =)
| Title: Wishing on a Miracle
| 22 Dec 2015 7:47 pm
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| Reviewer: JCJ58 (Signed)
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I am glad you didn't rewrite this, all of the Christmas stories have been so good, but this was the one I have been waiting for! Kudos for a great story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked the story!
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